Sunday, January 4, 2009

A Cinq-Cinquain

A string
- white and red - ties
Ankle to ankle - but
They don’t know. It’s invisible.
then, the

pull - what's
that?- he's gone cloud
diving – or, perhaps, sea-
swimming with a herd of drunken
blue whales.

Or she's
floated off to
Milada lakadi
By way of puff sleeves - two hot air
balloons

Caught in
The clouds - the wait -
Of wind and rain and sighs
And tears - Movement not always of
the feet.

His pause
- her lips - in the
'oh' of silence - they hear
a whisper of string-swept ground - a
still stir.



"An invisible red thread connects those who are destined to meet,
regardless of time, place, or circumstance.
The thread may stretch or tangle,
but it will never break." - Ancient Chinese Myth

2 Comments:

Blogger Nicholas said...

Including the ancient Chinese myth (which I wouldn't be surprised if you made up...) really helped me understand this! And I liked it much.

January 5, 2009 at 6:43 PM  
Blogger Ben said...

Be careful of threads; they have a propensity to net up, and the catch of the day won't be blue whales, sober or otherwise.

January 16, 2009 at 4:01 PM  

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